After reviewing your resume using our proprietary 100 point scale, your score is 42 out of 100.  There are many area where your resume can use improvement.  Since we will be writing your resume and addressing these flaws, I will only point out the major mistakes here in this evaluation.  To start with, the summary and section and qualifications section should be combined.  I applaud you for adding a summary...

This week, I am evaluating a  resume  from an entry level job seeker, who just graduated in 2008.  I am glad she came to me for advice and I am also glad that she has enlisted my resume writing service because she really needs some help.  This will be a 3 part post.  I will post the before resume below.  I will then follow that up with my resume critique and then since I am writing her resume, I will also...

Jennifer it looks like your resume could use a little work.  The average score for all the evaluations we have conducted over the last 3 years is 71.  The fact is that over 95% of all resumes have serious flaws.  The good news is that most of these flaws can be corrected.              To start with the format and the “look and feel’ can be improved upon.   The layout that you are using is...

A major part of my career consulting business is centered on writing resumes for my clients.  As a way to promote my services, I routinely offer free resume critiques.  I thought it would be helpful to my readers to post some of the resume evaluations, that we you can see the major blunders that most people make and the best ways to fix them.  Once a week, I will post a resume (personal information removed)...